334 New Health Club Memberships in five minutes
Monday, November 16th, 2009A friend and client, Ross Wilson just ran a direct mail marketing campaign for his health club in October and asked me to critique his direct mail layout before he sent it out to the public.
With just a few simple tweaks, he ended up generating:
334 New 12-month health club memberships
Raised $3,340 for the National Breast Cancer Foundation
Grossed $144,540 in total health club membership sales
Received A LOT of publicity for his health club
He ran a similar health club marketing campaign last October and generated only 116 new memberships. I can’t take credit for this because Ross is a pretty sharp guy and already had a solid design that probably would have sold a lot of health club memberships even without any tweaks. But for the sake of my ego, I’ll pretend I had something to do with his success
Here are some of the tweaks Ross made that helped him generate so many memberships:
1. Ross chose a price driven theme. He wanted prospects to know that they can save $100 and that the health club would donate $10 for every membership sold. But he had some mixed messages. He needed a stronger WIIFM (what’s in it for me) message. Instead of “Membership Special”, he chose “Feel Fit & Look Fabulous” and “Save $100 and we will make a donation to the National Breast Cancer Foundation”.
2. His layout was very busy and it was tough for the eyes to know where to look. Ross cleaned it up and made bolder headlines, added a round banner ad and left a bit more white space on the card to make it easier on the eyes.
3. There were multiple pictures of a similar looking lady. That takes up too much valuable real estate on the mailer where you could put more fitness sales copy or allow for more white space so that the message is clear and the eyes know where to go.
4. The headline was made bolder and bigger. It needs to present a reason for someone to read the remainder of the message on the mailer.
5. On the original, he had “membership specials only apply to ___ and ___ memberships”. We removed this because you don’t want to make people feel that you are limiting them or even forcing them into a big ticket health club membership package. The key to a mailer is to get them to take action. Period. Don’t tell them about restrictions on your first impression. If there are very important restrictions, put an asterisk on it and at the bottom state “In some cases, restrictions may apply” or similar.
6. We changed from a specific expiration date of October 31, to a “Hurry! Limited Time Offer expires in two weeks. So Call Today!”
And that’s it! I’ve watched and tested the result of hundreds of health club direct mail and other print marketing campaigns over the years and it is amazing how just a few simple tweaks can make the difference between a failed campaign and an uber successful campaign.
So when you are designing your fitness postcards for the New Year, remember the BIG 5 things you MUST have on your mailer.
- Powerful Headline
- Call to Action
- Single Message
- Urgency
- Uniqueness
And if you have room on the mailer, some social proof (testimonial, success story, before and after picture, etc) are very very powerful.
Dedicated to Your Success…
Curtis Mock
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Okay, so after 3 hours of fooling with this thing, I figured out how to post the original he sent. You’ll just have to use your imagination for some of the changes above lol. Hopefully it is clear enough to view!

Whew, that was painful. I tried and tried to get the newest one with the applied changes to post in here, but the format isn’t accepted. I tried converting and still no luck. But what this original mailer shows that you don’t need a flashy, bold color card. With just some basic tweaks on the sales copy, a fairly plain mailer can have some pretty extraordinary results.












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